Major GRAMMAR AND WRITING fixes! 1/2. And Patreon shout outs!


We update the files yet again! Sorry for the grammar inconvenience.

HUGE shout out to our patreon supporter and proofreader Icefang Cerule! He spent DAYS fixin all grammar errors and improving writing passing!

The only part left to improve the grammar is at the very last part of the story (Exactly where the protagonist lift up the wounded mysterious horse). We'll  work on uploading the last part of the corrections as soon as possible!

Also to our other patreon supporters: 

Special mention to Kemonodad for the hero tier support. We hired Kemonodad's Oc  to play as Ziliaris' elite guard 1! (There's still one last slot open for the other guard!) 

Electro237 for the Warrior tier support!

Tom and bob billion for the cooker tier support!

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Unveiling Demo 1.2 - Pc.zip 208 MB
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